You have shown proficent to excellent use of creativity and technical skill in the construction. It is a shame that suggested changes were not made
Front cover - '6 page poster special etc' text is justified left too much. Telling us whats on this month just in images means i have to guess, is it a story about a gig or a club opening or ...? Are those club images yours? Remember we need to see evidence of photo planning and test shots that would prove they are yours and you can stick to your plans. Bar code placement seems odd. What is sub soldiers and what is the logo in bottom right? Im not sure the whited out effect works. It would be nice to see some dubstep or d&b mags analysed in your research so that you can prove the designs and choices you use follow convention and/or cleverly break them.
Contents - im pleased to see a range of shot sizes and lots of images here but the problem is they are all obviously of the same event/night! So you say 'Faithless try thier hand at dubstep' but the image used is the same guy as on the cover (for example). The copy for the Expense story contains a spacing error and im not sure about using the word 'massive' twice in such a short space. The Borgore copy hits the image below. Doctor P is justified to the right too much.
Article - Same issues with images as above. Your drop capital E needs lifting. Check spelling and grammar. Get rid of any oprhans.
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